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Writing as I listen...

It's like something out of a movie, Ocean's Eleven comes to mind. You know, ambient background music to some elaborate master plan. I like it, this isn't really my style of music, but I honestly don't hate this at all.
Please don't add vocals, it could ruin the lovely backing track you have here. It's wonderful just the way it is.
I'm going to Download this, I like it a lot.

Mooooooo.

Writing as I listen.
Sounds like a bad industrial track to start with. Very repetitive.., it is still repetitive.
Try adding some variation, and changing chords.. and using different synths.
Maybe experiment with more sounds, too. I can hear a lot of potential with this song, it's good for a base track, but it needs a lot of work.

I like how the beat progressed, and how the tempo changed, you could build on that, add in a new melody and some pads..

This track really needs a lot more doing to it.

I hate flutes.

Stupid flutes, they take over half of the concert band... clarinets too. Us oboe players get a pathetic section right in front of the conductor. It's pants!
Anyway, synthed flutes, blah.. any way, this sounds more like pipes that flutes.
It's nice an relaxing. Lovely melody, sounds quite celtic in parts, especially 1:24 to 1:27 it's the slide..
Very lovely all the same.

Acrolith responds:

Deep down you do love flutes though, right?

I mean, we all do.

oh and thanks

So I checked out your top 5.

This is much better than "A single kiss".
Everything just seems right, but again.. it still feels a little claustrophobic... some nice reverb effects would be good... and again, at 1:30ish.. that effect.. could last longer..
But it's all very lovely. {:

( "A single kiss" works better as a loop. ;P )

Helth responds:

thanks =]

i like it like this XD, doesnt need reverb, caus i added some other effects ;]

Helth
thanks anyway =D

I think this will be...

My new CoD4 sniping song.
:D
Happy happy die die!
Oh wait.. no. I don't like the break down. ):
Actually, this is pretty predictable. Seems like it was thrown together in a few minutes, in my opinion.. nothing really stands out, no lovely melodies or different chord changes... apart from the end.. you could've expanded on that a little more.. just trails off.
Ehh.. I liked it more at the beginning.. then I didn't like it so much in the middle.. then I liked it at the end, but it just stopped, and I thought it was going somewhere... never mind.

:D

Sounds very epic.

Would sound even better with my headphones, but they're gone.
This is such a good song for an RPG game.
Titled well, executed well, good choices of instruments.
Love it.
{:

Grats on the top 5.

FairSquare responds:

Thanks!
Too bad your headphones are gone :P

Not exactly D&B

More break beat? But it's not the right rhythm for D&B, in my opinion.

Eh..

Seems a bit long for a loop.
Yes, it does need drums.. and a proper bass.
Catchy tune, though.

I shall draw a picture.

Do show you what kind of zombies are these.
<3
But thanks, though.. this is awesome. {:

Adamaja456 responds:

thank you <33

I'm listening.

I'm not thinking game menu music at the beginning of the track. Credits, yes.
Very much so. Cut scenes too. Not so much menu music. In my experience, menu music tends to either be a lot more eerie, annoying, upbeat, or ridiculously catchy.
This is very mellow and seems to me, better for ending an epic war game of some sorts. It's like a remix of DeVotchKa songs, I to like it.
I don't really have much to criticise about it. There's nothing drastically wrong with it, in my opinion.

tijnn responds:

Thanks for that kind comment, but i tend to step out of the box when it comes to game music etcetera. I don't think it should all be hyped up ADHD loops for a menu, if you have a chill out game, this would suit.

There aren't a lot of games on newgrounds that use ambient-ish songs to fill up a game, but a game doesn't always have to be an intense adrenaline rush that highly keeps you busy for 10 minutes.

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