Hang on a minute...
I hear sounds I recognise.. Fruitypoops?.. hahah
The beginning is really catchy all the same. Hardstyle? Nah. Too soft. Jumpstyle!
It's the claps, it's all about the claps.
I love it.
Ok, maybe halfway through it's sounding more hardstyle. It's like a mash-up.
Really catchy.
Fruiypoops what? xD
and u call this jumpstyle ?;S
anyway thanks for the review! ;D
Uhm. No.
I hate the drum beat. I hate the hihats? I don't know what they're called.
I like the strings, though. They can stay.
Everything else can gtfo.
New beats pls.
adamyouhoebag.
Frootypoops.
The sounds.. so...ugh. Fruity.
Try recording more of your own.
It's damn catchy, though.
I don't like how it just stops.
Hahah I recognise that drumloop.
Grats on just putting a bunch of sounds together, though.
/bitch.
Odd..
You have some interesting clashes going on there. They're not exactly the good kind, either.
It's starts off very well, I'm not a fan of the cow bell, though.
It's a catchy beat, yes. Very repetitive.
The piano melody is lovely.
Everything is good on it's own, not mixed together.
It's a nice try. :D
thank you for giving me CONSTRUCTIVE criticism as opposed to saying, "this song sucks. moving on."
it's nice to at least know WHY someone doesn't like my work, or why something in a song of mine doesn't work for them.
Potential
For epic hardcore remixes.
It's a good track, I love the tune. Sometimes it felt like it just stopped too soon, and the flow was broken.
I liked the ending. It's just like a roller coaster.. stops all of a sudden. ;)
Thanks for the advice :) I will try to make it flow a bit more especially the transition from the first section to the second part, there's room there for putting in more things. I haven't even made the ending yet that's why it ended so suddenly hehe. I will check out your stuff :)
Perfect 5th.
Got that got annoying. Yes, it's a strong interval geeeeeze sue something else!
Thanks for changing the chord though.. even if it were nearer the end of the section.
Boring and repetitive beginning.
Slightly better at around 1:50 where the section section broke in.
Much much much much better 2:00 to the end. It was a lot easier to get into the song. Lovely chord changes, very nice.
Good listening.
The introduction really hooked me into the song.
I love the synths, I love how you've mixed a harsh sound with a softer one, it was done very well indeed.
I like the drum beat too.
All in all, very nice, not too long or too short in my opinion.
Summary too short, whut?
I love the synths, they fit so nicely together.
Good tune, too very catchy not over powering.
All in all, very well done.
Yikes. . A zero. . . I must need to improve a lot!
Kidding, never mind - it happens to all of us :P
Go go!
Absolutely beautiful.
Very well done, it's not like any of the trance I normally listen to.
Keep up the good work!
Yes Ma'am haha, thanks ^^
Eh.
When the second voice comes in and over laps the first, it sounds weird.. they clash... badly. I don't like the random stops and starts and changing between voices, either.. To me, is sounds like serialist techno. Serialism is bad on it's own, it doesn't need a techno beat. ;p
But that's just what I think.
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