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Songs are better...

When they don't sound like the other 3? songs you've recently made. ;p It's ok to have elements of the same song... as a signature... but using the same loops over and over.. is just a bit... blah.
It's ambient, well done for that... and I hate FL studio standard sounds.. the pads.. I'm assuming that's the sytrus.. that's the best part of the song...but it's very repetitive... and that gets annoying after a while... try adding in some ornamentation with the melody, that helps...
dot dot dot.
I like your uh... breakbeat section? that's nice.

Other than that, there's not much, musically, wrong with it...
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zenodio responds:

Thanks a lot =)

Constructive critism is always allowed at my submissions. And yeah i used the same presets too many times.

And yeah, this needs more variation... Sorry...

That voice scared me.

The bass is orgasmic. I hate the cymbal you've chosen.. and this build up is.. alright.
I hope it actually goes somewhere, I like the squeaky synth you have there, but not the acid underneath... still loving the bass beats, and those trippy phaser effects? you have going on there.
But... it doesn't really pick up, or do anything, which is disappointing.. I'm sure you could break it into something.. speed it up.. add in some pads, I don't know..

Bu the guy down there is right.. it does sound like monkeys!

perro-electric responds:

Hmm, i think i'm going to rename this track to "the monkey song" ;-)

From your ass?

So it's shit?
Whatever floats your boat.

Trippy effects in my ears, but it's repetitive and.. is that a loop I hear in there?
This could be more fun with more variation, and chord changes... and it doesn't flow properly back into 1:13.

Other than that, keep on shitting?

Doombox162 responds:

Yep, exactally. :D

Yeah, there's a couple of loops in there actually. And I know, I set the cue on my DJ program a second to soon and couldn't fix it. :(

So Baroque melody gets to you too, huh?

Can't double the third if you've got a first inversion, no minor 2nds, no parallel 5ths or octaves. Stepwise movements, leading note must rise... you know the drill.

Acid trance is weeeeeeird, as is this song, which is awesome.
I'm at 2:00 now and I'm not hearing 'modern' trance.. and you have odd instrument choices.. I like that too.. I wouldn't call this trance though..
Makes me think of some freak industrial/gothic circus.

Darren-M responds:

well haha, i had to put the song somewhere! i kinda meant modern as in the bass style. ok so maybe it doesnt completely follow the tradition but just listening to vivaldi and bach gave me alot of ideas

i make all the instruments and to me idk why they just seem to fit together. but i am really glad someone out there thought they worked too because sometimes i get carried away.

thanks for this most interesting review! much appreciated

"Trancemission" HA! That's cute.

I like the beginning, but it doesn't really flow very well into 0:38, it just sounds like you stuck the two parts together.
From my experience with trance music, it's supposed to flow seemingly from section to section.. and in places it sounds like you're sticking loops together, I can hear slight pauses and breaks.. something doesn't mix right.
I hate to ask but, fruityloops?
It's all a bit up in the air too, I think it could do with a bit more depth to it.
And more emotion, trance is all about how it makes you feel.. this feels more like a house track when it 'breaks'.. not sure if I'd call it that, either.
I like your synths, they're good, your general chord progressions melodies and harmonies are alright, it's just the structure and texture I'm not fond of.

djwizzkid responds:

you might like trancebass better than this one... also look @ crimson sun aswell please.

thnku

It's not a sonata.

Try reading up on definitions before naming your songs, instead of just sounding like you know what you're talk about... that came across like I'm an smug asshole.. I'm not.. sorry.

It's nice, but it feels like you've just tried to drag out the piece too long. If you're going to make something when you're bored, try putting a bit of effort into it instead of just shoving together a 4 minute long snoozefest.
When I'm bored, I make shorts, and I make them good. I no longer feel bored.

Super-Assassin responds:

Wow
Your totally right
On all fronts
Mebbe I should...

Starts out pretty catchy.

Then kinda goes all weeeeeird... with your major chords n' such.
Still catchy. {:

Panflute thingies? I hate those. I:
Acid synths all the way. {:

Adamaja456 responds:

thanks, i repeated the first section but i wanted it to sound a little different so i added the flutes. and i love flute<3
:D

I hate flutes.

Stupid flutes, they take over half of the concert band... clarinets too. Us oboe players get a pathetic section right in front of the conductor. It's pants!
Anyway, synthed flutes, blah.. any way, this sounds more like pipes that flutes.
It's nice an relaxing. Lovely melody, sounds quite celtic in parts, especially 1:24 to 1:27 it's the slide..
Very lovely all the same.

Acrolith responds:

Deep down you do love flutes though, right?

I mean, we all do.

oh and thanks

So I checked out your top 5.

This is much better than "A single kiss".
Everything just seems right, but again.. it still feels a little claustrophobic... some nice reverb effects would be good... and again, at 1:30ish.. that effect.. could last longer..
But it's all very lovely. {:

( "A single kiss" works better as a loop. ;P )

Helth responds:

thanks =]

i like it like this XD, doesnt need reverb, caus i added some other effects ;]

Helth
thanks anyway =D

Sounds very epic.

Would sound even better with my headphones, but they're gone.
This is such a good song for an RPG game.
Titled well, executed well, good choices of instruments.
Love it.
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Grats on the top 5.

FairSquare responds:

Thanks!
Too bad your headphones are gone :P

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